• Both the Childhood and School Years section of the application need to have a minimum of 200 words. Currently, the Childhood section has only 190 words and School Years section has 189 words.
• You’re also missing one dislike from your list.
• For the school years section, you mentioned getting Sebastian’s wand, but he would’ve gotten his wand before going to school. Also, Sebastian has been in school for four years already, it would be nice to have little more about his experiences through the four years.
• You didn’t mention you Alias, so can you fill that part out.