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Oct 27, 2024 8:38:40 GMT
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Your personality goes from 3rd person (she/her) to 1st person (I) and needs to be edited to 3rd person. It is also really similar to your other characters: brave, confident, overprotective etc. I know it can be difficult to write a personality but perhaps some changes to make your character more unique would be helpful.
Aspiration. She has the same aspirations as your characters Melody Turner and Sun Kim. There are so many professions out there aside from Healer and Jewelry/Clothing designer and would likely give you somewhere new to explore rather than staying in the same Career paths.
Comparing this character to your other characters also has many of the same likes and dislikes:
LIKES:
-The Outdoors x2
-Reading x3
-Hanging out with friends x3
-Music x2
-Shopping x1
DISLIKES:
-Snobs x4
-Bullies x1
-Snakes x2
-Prejudice x2
-Liars x2
If you are struggling to think up likes and dislikes there are resources you can use with lists of things you can look through.
School Years. Again the max is 500 words and you are at 618.
Please make some changes and then tag the admin team when you are ready to be reviewed again.
Oct 27, 2024 7:30:46 GMT
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Oct 20, 2024 1:48:51 GMT
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Oct 20, 2024 1:41:27 GMT
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Oct 15, 2024 23:47:28 GMT
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Oct 15, 2024 3:23:57 GMT
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Thank you so much for adding that little bit more in ♥
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Oct 14, 2024 18:31:33 GMT
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Lucy Weasley, your app looks great so far but your Adulthood section is only 127 words long and it needs to meet the 200 word minimum. Once you've added a bit more let us know!
Lucy Weasley, your app looks great so far but your Adulthood section is only 127 words long and it needs to meet the 200 word minimum. Once you've added a bit more let us know!
Oct 13, 2024 2:26:19 GMT
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Oct 13, 2024 1:59:09 GMT
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Everything looks just fine but her birthday/age needs to be changed.
An October birthday would make her a 17-year-old 6th year. To be a 7th year her birthday has to be before September 1st (17) or a year earlier in 2002 (18).
Everything looks just fine but her birthday/age needs to be changed.
An October birthday would make her a 17-year-old 6th year. To be a 7th year her birthday has to be before September 1st (17) or a year earlier in 2002 (18).
Oct 6, 2024 23:37:18 GMT
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Oct 6, 2024 21:47:32 GMT
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Oct 6, 2024 19:57:24 GMT
Apple #27 - As you bring up the apple you notice a tag on its stem. Congratulations, the tag reads 10 Post Boost! Let me know which character you would like to attach the 10 posts to Antony Petrova ♥
Kai Shimada likes this
Oct 5, 2024 22:10:38 GMT
Apple #32 explodes into rainbow sparkles that cover you completely. Bad luck that it doesn't come with a prize! Kai Shimada
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Oct 3, 2024 19:17:40 GMT
Benjamin V. Castillo Apple # 8 has a tag attached! It reads 'Year Bump', congratulations! Let me know which character you would like this with or if you'd like to save it for future use.
